The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
Wonderful! Your rhyme and meter were spot on, and the message was absolutely lovely. Great payoff at the end.
06/13/05
Beautiful poem. Flows wonderfully.
Your poetic gifting is evident in this piece. The ease with which if flows paints a marvelous picture in the few lines of the poem. One can see the church and the lives it touched in the soul's imagination as vividly as if one was there.
06/14/05
wow...loved this!
06/14/05
"Beautiful!" "Simply Beautiful!" I feel so at peace after reading this. You are quite a gifted poet!
06/15/05
Bravo! This poem is so well done that I will ask some of my writing students to come on line and read it.
06/18/05
This beautiful poem imprints pictures in my mind--of the past. Let's remember Jesus' church, with no walls, is still alive today.
06/18/05
A well crafted poem, very nice.
06/21/05
This is lovely, Linda. The sentiments, the way it flows ... it is great. Well done!