The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your story very much. Great going.
This is so touching, it's one of my favorites for this week! It reaches the heart and the writer in me. ^_^ You did well with showing this bond between these two.
I'm only a tad confused at one point where she was eleven and then at the altar, she was eight?
Otherwise, this was special for me. Great writing! ^_^
You have such a natural storytelling ability. I was immersed in this piece from the moment I began to read it. I really hope this one places high this week, because it is very good.

Keep up the great writing! I want to see more entries from you. :)
Yes it's a favourite of mine this week too. Good story telling. like it a lot! Thanks