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04/10/08
I love the chuckle in here! I liked her sense of humor, that was very creative to work into here. My favorite lines though, were when she was chasing the coffee bubbles...great job! ^_^
04/10/08
Nice character sketch--I'd have liked more that showed her sense of humor. She was an intriguing person.
04/11/08
This was a good start, but I felt like it needed more filling.
I enjoyed this glimpse into your grandmother's life.

This felt kind of short to me, and I would have liked to read more about your grandmother, especially more about her humor.

Thank you for sharing this. Keep on writing.
Great...God bless.
01/19/10
Great article, Sunny! Thanks also for commenting on mine, entitled OW!
It was my intention to write something funny/fictional,frankly, it's not one of my best!!!!

Happy New Year to you and yours,

Love

Veronica
Really enjoyed reading this article Sunna. Sounds like you had a great relationship with your gramma. We are enjoying that with our grandchildren now. At least with some of them as we only have 24 at present. I don't know if I had ever thanked you for your kind comments on my poetry. It probably is a tad belated. THANK YOU. GARY JAMES SMITH . HAVE A GREAT DAY.