The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/07
Your title caught my attention and the rest was well done. Good job. I liked the flow and meter.
12/14/07
Beautiful, just beautiful! I loved the repetition of "In a lucid night's dream."
12/15/07
I enjoyed this - the poetry flowed nicely, and the message of Christ's Body carrying out His work is wonderful. Cat.
12/16/07
Beautiful!
12/17/07
A poem! I like how you emphasized each body part and the told their "job".
The rhyme and rhythm was good. Well done
"From holding the children,
Close to His breast"
I love that image of Jesus - You also show some good action images of Jesus' ministry in short, tight verses. Nicely done!
12/18/07
Four stars! I loved it.
12/19/07
Excellently written, both meter and rhyme! The message is encouraging.
Good job! I think you should continue the experiment.
You did a fantastic job expressing the atributes of Christ in this poem. Your writing is absolutely lovely. Well done.