The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
From experience I know that grief is not so easily conquered and can lead to serious depression. I wonder if the wife's speech in the last paragraph could have been broken up into a dialogue between the two of them. I liked the beginning, and I loved the message. My husband prays over me before he goes to work in the morning. I, too, sometimes pretend to be sleeping, but his parayers make a great difference to my day. Good job!
05/23/05
Perhaps open this up a little for readability, although it is a powerful testimony to prayer.
05/24/05
Wonderful! A reminder to us that God does answer prayer.
Yes, prayer opens up the opportunity for God to do His work. Nicely done.
05/31/05
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the Level 1 Challenge awards. Well done. With that win behind you, now it's time to jump up to the Challenge of Level 2. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)