The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful way to express the agape love that the born again believer should have. Love that keeps on even when it hurts so much. Thanks for sharing!
Beautiful poem! Even the title was a good choice. Although, it did take me a little while to figure out that it was a rhyming poem because the lines threw me off a bit, it was still a great piece. I suggest you tighten your lines a little and add it in your portfolio should you decide to freelance someday. Just a layperson's opinion, but I can see it going in front of the masses someday. Great job!