The Official Writing Challenge
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You definitely capture the fearful moments in Scripture... I always wonder too, if I would have had the kind of courage the early saints had for what they faced back then - so thanks for the reminder that Perfect Love casts out fear.
Just one suggestion, but you might try pulling some dialogue into your story... gives it a bit more life.
Other than that, well done. Thanks for sharing.
09/03/07
I like the stories which show scriptures in a whole new light-it kinda turns the light bulb on in my head (anyone else feel that or is it just crazy ole' me?) Anyways, great writing here. You have a talent and God is letting you shine with it. Don't ever quit writing! (That last part was not me typing just to let you know--He is smiling over your shoulder) God Bless!
Great job! :) You'll go places. Delight in Him and He will give you the desires of your heart! I love this piece! :)