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08/23/07
Really interesting analogy! I never would have thought of it.

You might want to stick with just the washing machine metaphor, and edit out the hamster and the looking under rocks. That'll add focus to your piece.

Nicely done, and full of truth.
08/24/07
Enjoyed your piece; loved the analogy between the washing machine and the purging process of a Christian.

Oh, and I beg to differ, keep the hamster in. I have hamsters, and I relate to them on their wheel often...going, going, going, but never getting anywhere! Yes!
Different comparison here. Comparing life to the washing process. Good job.