The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/07
This is cute, and so true to life. I feel like Mat sometimes, even though I'm 24! I'd love to have a dog, but dad says "no."

There were a few minor errors, (a missing word and a few unneeded commas) but overall, this was a great story.

Keep writing!
Children should love this little adventure story.