The Official Writing Challenge
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I can see this being read in a child's classroom. You had me jumping and swinging with her. Good job.
06/07/07
I think this would be a hit with young children. I loved the descriptions, especially, 'her hair flying in the wind'; I could almost feel the wind myself. Good job!
06/07/07
This really follows the rhythms of a good children's story. The plot is simple, but descriptive--something I think young children could identify with.
06/08/07
I enjoyed this story - thank you very much.
Children should really enjoy this. Good writing.
Really a darling story. Children would relate to this. Thx for sharing this with us,very cute. Reminds me of our little 6 yr old daughter.Janice