The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
Is this you, or a fictional character? The flow is nice for a non-fiction story.
05/31/07
I love stories of people who go against norm, and do what they were told they couldn't.
This is written well. I would have liked a little conversation to make it more interesting. And "sargeant" should be "sergeant". The story is very good.
06/02/07
I wonder if it would have been more fitting the "adventure" topic for you to tell some of your patrol stories...nevertheless, this was inspiring and pleasant to read.
I would have liked to hear more details about one adventure as a patrolwoman. Good job.
06/04/07
Your story caught my attention and I'd like to know more about your character's experiences on the job!