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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Write in the SCIENCE FICTION genre (05/10/07)

TITLE: Fuzz Ball
By Donald Paulson
05/12/07


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“Hey, Fuzz ball!”

I stop. Thinking, "Fuzz Ball? Who are they talking to? Keep moving."

“Hey, Fuzz Ball. Yeah, you…where’d you get that fancy fur coat? Did your mommy give it to you?”

I look back only to see two slimy characters sticking their heads out of their hole in the ground. Oh, I know them well.

Perhaps if I just keep moving.

“Hey, buddy, come on over here and tell us your story again, ha, ha, ha,” snort, grunt. The one called Crawler has been giving me the worst time.

“Yeah, tell us about how you’re going to change one day and fly away,” his buddy, No Shoulders retorts.

Perhaps if I told them to ‘eat dirt’ they’d leave me alone. But that’s not the attitude I’m supposed to have.

“Okay, I’ll tell it all to you again,” turning towards them, acting as if I’m going over to them.

“POP”, back into their holes. I didn’t think so. I must keep a good attitude about this. They too could be part of this if they’d only open their eyes and ears.

I need to seek higher ground. The signs of a change are becoming apparent and I must prepare myself. I must seek that tree to cling to.

Moving on, the heads pop back out, mockingly acting as if they have a coat of many colors on. They watch as “Fuzz Ball” slowly goes out on a limb and goes to work.

“Hey, Crawler, what d’ya think he’s doing?”

“Looks to me like he can’t take it any more. Going into his cocoon if ya ask me,” almost splitting their sides laughing.

What’s happening to me? I’m being changed. From the inside. What will I be like when He’s through with me?

Months pass. Occasionally our two worm friends notice the cocoon, they see movement inside once in awhile but that’s all. They go about their business as if nothing in their little world is wrong.

One day No Shoulders looks up. “Hey Crawler, something’s happening!”

The cocoon is moving violently. Swaying, bulging, splitting.

Slowly it opens. Even slower does a creature emerge, unlike what it was before, a new creation. Wings fill with life giving fluid. Beautiful wings start to flutter. The new creature lifts up and soars into the air.

“Hey Crawler, how do ya like that?”

“Nay, it’s not for me. I just stay here and eat dirt.”

“Yea, me too.”

I look down to see my two former adversaries going into the ground, only then do I notice they do not have eyes to see or ears to hear. Higher and higher I ascend, to meet my Master.



Be not conformed to this world, but be ye transformed by the renewing of your mind that you may prove what is that good and acceptable and perfect will of God. Romans 12:2 (KJV)


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Sharon Henderson 05/18/07
Nice imagary. Good comparison. I'm a bit new to the genres used on this site but this may be more suited for childrens fantasy than for science fiction. Still I love the analogy and it would do great if made into an illustrated childrens book.
Jacquelyn Horne05/18/07
Very good rendition of the butterfly. Interesting.
LaNaye Perkins05/18/07
This was a delightful read. Keep writing!
Betty Castleberry05/20/07
What a perfect story for an illustrated children's book. It has a great lesson, and is adorably written. I'm not sure it's quite on topic for sci-fi, but it's a good read. Well done.
Sara Harricharan 05/21/07
I agree with comments on this being a great children's piece! I loved the dialouge and the title of "Fuzz ball" caught my attention. I didn't guess they were worms until you mentioned it though. Pretty good.
Edy T Johnson 05/24/07
You write so well, and create such winsome little characters! I enjoyed reading this and appreciated the message. I agree this would be a delightful illustrated storybook for more than just the children!


   
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