The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/07
What a beautiful love letter! The section in italics is exceptionally well-written.

A slight tense inconsistency in the first paragraph--otherwise, this piece is nearly flawless. Nice job.
This is a good story. I would have prefered it written in the first person, but it still is a good article.