The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well thought out story. You might check out the last sentence in the second paragraph; I don't quite understand how "needful" fits in. Other than that, I really liked it! Keep writing for Him!
03/18/07
Lovely description and lesson. I wish the two had been tied together just a bit more - but this was a great read. Keep writing!
03/26/07
This holds great promise, I especially enjoyed the first two paragraphs about the homeless stranger and the boy. Keep writing, this was a good read!