The Official Writing Challenge
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Poetry is my favorite..I loved your message here. Keep on writing and exalting Jesus
I think what struck me the most after reading this is that maybe the biggest problem we face, is to find our thankful heart. It made me stop and think, do we often not reach our potential simply because we forgot how to be thankful for the small or twisting roads we had to travel to get there?
04/29/05
A delightful and well thought our poem. Well done for not forcing the rhymes. A few technical tips. If you haven't got any punctuation you don't need to start each line with a capital letter. Don't capitalize important words; give the reader the opportunity to find the importance for themselves. Especially on line where cap = a shout. Watch out for repetition like 'it is'.