The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/07
Interesting historical fiction, and right on topic.

Be careful with switching from past to present tense.

Thanks for sharing this look into Biblical history.
01/21/07
A wonderful history lesson - something I had no idea about. Very engaging. Watch your tense shifts, and some grammar issues. This was VERY interesting to me!