The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way the writer worked the thoughts from a child's begging writings to the the Word that came down to earth. The WORD was put on the cross - the written words on the cross and the Word made flesh.
01/20/07
A powerful poem--I like that you explored so many aspects of writing and the Word.

Some minor metrical edits might make this even stronger.

Very well done.
A very well thought out poem.
I loved the stanza aout the Declaration of Independence and then of course the stanza about the begginning of all writng. Nicely done.
01/25/07
The message in this poem is both beautiful and profound. Your piece will be stronger if you choose strong, visual words. Get your thesaurus out and dig. Be encouraged. This is great work!!
A very inspirational poem here.