The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/07
I understood what you were trying to convey by this article -- showing episodes from Ila's life and her progression as a cook. Very clever way to write a story. You gave me a new idea on how to write!! This read like an outline and could have been more developed. But I think you writing has lots of potential.
01/14/07
I agree. Each episode in itself was a great beginning/part of a story. If these parts were woven together you would have a very enjoyable piece. Keep writing!
01/15/07
I liked that it was an easy read and gave us a behind the seen look, Thanks for sharing.
It took me awhile to see what you were getting at here, but it finally sank in. This is a very good illustration.