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11/19/06
A very nice story although it seemed a bit weak on topic. I liked the way the angel kept appearing. The angel was right on time... just like God. Nice job.
11/20/06
Ha! Boy did that guardian angel have his hands full!!! Sweet touch to have her tears heal him.
11/21/06
Hehe "I turned if off at lunchtime." I love that line. This is a great reminder about how many times our own guardian angel saves us and we don't even know it!
11/21/06
Written in a captivating way. You drew me in from the beginning and held my attention with your incredible imagination.
11/21/06
Very creative! Love all the appearances, and your description. Nice work!
11/22/06
Interesting and fun narration; use some caution with gerunds and participles and I think you can go a long way. Thanks for sharing.