The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/06
Thank you for the clear images and comforting verses. The lines flowed and rhymed well. Martha
Lovely poetry! Very gentle and peaceful.
09/17/06
Lovely! It captures the beauty and serenity of a garden. Well done!
I love this poem. It is so comforting . Thanks!
09/19/06
Ahh...So beautiful with such great flow. You touched my heart and made me long to sit under the canopy of His love. Beautiful!!!
09/19/06
Very peacesful images, I'd like to be there right now! Consistent rhythm works. Well done. yeggy
09/20/06
These verses are as lovely as the garden they are describing. I enjoyed this "visit" very much!
Beautiful poem. I especially liked the last stanza. Good job!