The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
Lovely! It flowed like water and is just as refreshing. I love your descriptive words.
09/11/06
Wonderful description - and I just love how this flows. I really enjoyed this!!!
09/11/06
Very nicely done. I love the light, airy feeling of the verses--much like a gently flowing river. Lovely descriptions and quite thought provoking.
11/01/06
I really enjoyed this one. It's probably my favorite of yours! Beautiful imagery and very fluid. Good job!
Very good poem. I especially liked the last stanza. Very encouraging.