The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
A very nice exposition of the 23rd Psalm. I'd encourage you to avoid using dictionary definitions; rather, "define" the word by inference, and by using your own unique style.
08/21/06
"I am not to camp out in the valley, but go through it..." Yes, yes, yes! This sweet little piece is encouraging and uplifting indeed! Good work!
08/21/06
Expand the question of "Is a valley a good thing or a bad thing (Biblically or otherwise)?" Maybe you could include some real-life examples of times of challenge, triumph, or rest. (which wouldn't have to be soul-searchingly painful things)

Good thoughts here. Keep writing.
08/22/06
A beautiful description of a valley, and a nice devotional; just a few minor glitch's that need editing, but otherwise a very good job.