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TITLE: Remember, Remember His Perfect Love
By Jacob Gibson
02/06/09
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There's something you should know about me. Something I've struggled with for a long time is negative thoughts. But I don't just have a few of them. I often think them most of the time and it's always about myself. I'm a failure. I hopeless. I'm boring. And I often do this automatically without hardly realizing it. Not long ago I rediscovered this problem and knew I had to do something about this or the devil would keep from many blessings at best, eventual suicide at very worst. So one night at the end of Wednesday night church I asked my youth pastor to pray for me about this and determined to do my best to tell myself the truth and remember how much God loves me. I'm ready to be a new person and a stronger man for Christ. Let us all remember the truth and be set free from depression and discouragement. (A light rock song with some string and wind instruments. I think I'm somewhat inspired by the style of Coldplay and David Crowder Band)
*light instrumental introduction*

Is the glass half empty or is it half full?
Are you happy with who you are? Content with your life?
Do you worry what your friends may think of you?
Are you fun and popular or just a loser?

Do you ever think you can't be loved?
And this overcrowded world would be better without you?
Is my life a waste? Am I simply a failure?
Where are these questions coming from?

I... am... nothing... am... dumb... am... overlooked
I... wish... I... could be anyone but meeeeeeee
*whisper* I... am... dying... from... the... inside-out
This... must... stop... or... I WILL DROWN INSIDE OF ME!

Remember His Love, His perfect love
Remember the blood He spilled for you
Remember that God made you for a reason
It's not a mistake that you're breathing today!

The devil wants me to believe that I'm as worthless as he is
His wicked lies are like fiery arrows in my heart
But the truth is that he hates us and wants to destroy our souls.
He's no friend of mine and I've had enough of his "good advice"

Lord, tell me the truth every time I'm deceived
Whisper your love to me when I awake
Fill my heart with your words and set me free
So I can give compassion to those who surround me!

I... am... valuable... am special... am... not overlooked
I... know... I... am... happy to be me
*whisper* I... am... so... alive... I could dance all day
Thank you, my Father, for saving me again

*short instrumental performance*

He loves me
He loves me
He loves me
He loves me

He loves you
He loves you
He loves you
He loves you

He made us
His Son died for us
He forgives us
He guides us

He breaks our chains
He fills us with joy
He holds us close
He carries us

He guides us
He comforts us
He corrects us
He provides for us

He made us a home with Him forever
How can you say that you're not worth it?

Remember... remember... remember... remember...
Remember... remember... remember... remember...

Remember (His awesome love!) Remember (His perfect love!)
Remember (His sweet love!) Remember (His perfect love!)
Remember (His unthinkable love!) Remember (His perfect love!)
Remember (His everlastingl love!) Remember (His perfect love!)

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Remember His love for you

*music fades*
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