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I went to Rev. Jake DeShazer's memorial service today and left the below in an envelope for his family. Originally written for FaithWriters. One of his daughters mentioned her dad told her after he was saved two years into his solitary confinement he was covered with lice and bedbugs and counted 70 boils on his body at the time. He raised his hands up and said, "God please take me out of here now to be with you. I am in misery. I want to go to heaven." He looked at his hands and they were empty. He thought, "How can I meet my Lord with empty hands. He brought them dawn, put them behind his back and said, "Lord, give me a second chance to enter into Your presence without empty hands."
The POW’s Joy
Originally written 13Oct07
December 1941, Oregon country boy turned soldier, Private Jake DeShazer sat disgustedly peeling potatoes on KP wondering why he had joined the Army. Suddenly the radio blared, “The Japanese just bombed Pearl Harbor”. Throwing the half peeled potato against the wall, “I’ll get those dirty Japs!”
A few months later the Private got his wish. A secret plan was being formulated to bomb Tokyo itself. Most considered it a suicide mission but America was now at war and losing on every front in the Pacific. This was a chance to show that America could strike back, at the very heart of Japan. Jake DeShazer wanted to be a part of it. He became one of the Doolittle’s Raiders.
The plan worked, Tokyo was bombed but unfortunately not all the Raiders made it to safety. Several were captured by the Japanese, Jake DeShazer was one. He was to spend over three years in solitary confinement as a POW.
Three years is a long time to spend alone. A long time to think…to think about life, about death, and about God. Although raised in church he hadn’t paid much attention. Now he was paying attention to life around him, thinking, trying to figure things out…why, what was it all about, did he really matter, did God even know he existed, here in this dirty cell?
After years in captivity the Japanese allowed several books into the prison, the Bible was one. The tapping on cell walls used as communication between prisoners went unanswered from DeShazer’s cell as he read the Bible through three times. Several wondered if he was dead. Indeed Mr. DeShazer did die in that cell. And was born again into the kingdom of God, discovering his answers in the Person of Jesus Christ.
He knew one of the first actions he needed to do was to be baptized as Jesus commanded. How was this to happen? Ask the prison guards for permission to be baptized? “Off with your head!” would be their answer. How?
Wind and rain blew through the cell window. Moving to the window, arms wide, God Himself “sprinkled” Jake and gave a calmness to his heart.
Love your enemies. And there were plenty of enemies all around him. This had to be the next step in following Jesus as the most brutal guard came to his cell to throw in Jake’s next meal.
“How is your family doing?” Hesitating, What was this all about? Seeing a sincere smile, he answered. Deshazer followed with, “That is good to hear.” Every day the conversations became longer and deeper.
As the war was nearing an end the POW’s were all ordered to be executed. Marines miraculously rained from the sky, Jake and his fellow POWs were rescued.
“Was this all God had for me?” Jake wondered.
Returning to the United States he enrolled in Bible College, fell in love, and they made plans to go to Japan as missionaries. Six years after the war Mr. and Mrs. DeShazer went to Japan with world wide coverage: “Former POW, Missionary to Japan” the headlines read.
Mitsuo Fuchida hung his head as he stepped off the bus to his war crimes trial in Tokyo. As the leader of the attack on Pearl Harbor he knew his fate was not good. But worse for Mitsuo was that all his life had been wasted, his family disgraced, his hope and faith in his ancestral gods and teachings wrong, reduced from hero to failure.
“Jake DeShazer, POW and Missionary to speak tonight” cried the man handing out flyers. Mr. Mitsuo took one, “I’ve heard of this man, why did he come back?” After reading the flyer, he bought a Bible written in Japanese. Starting at Genesis he read until he came to where, on the cross, Jesus said, “Father, forgive them: for they know not what they do.”
Who is this Jesus, so strong He can forgive His enemies?
Mr. Mitsuo, fallen warrior, met with Jake DeShazer, former POW, and was led to Jesus. Together they traveled as brothers in Christ and witnessed the love of God to Japan and the world. Thousands will be there when he passes on to glory.
Forever after note: Mitsuo Fuchida was among those thousands at Heaven’s gate to greet Mr. DeShazer on 15Mar08 as he too entered into glory.
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