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TITLE: Forgiveness
By Jeryl Jasmine
06/06/07
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Can we forgive and just drop it,
All the bitterness, can we just stop it?
When life seems so cruel and unfair
Can we forfiet getting our fair share?

Can we go to our most hated foe in peace
In sincere hope that the pain and hurt will cease?
Apporach him with only God's love in our heart
Are we even willing to begin, to make a start?

Do we realize the damage we do to ourself
When we don't truly forgive someone else?
Do we know we become closed and cold
That Satan has completely taken hold?

The only way to break his grip and get away
Is to fall on your knees and pray, pray, pray
With all our heart for God to cleanse our sin
That we may go to our enemy and begin again.

When we truly forgive as God does
We show everyone His unconditional love
We too are blessed by His love and care
For we all get what is really our share.
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