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TITLE: Consumating Prayer
By Jennifer Alexander
11/19/09
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This poem details the joy of relationship, in the presence of the Lord.
I lose myself
Caught in the rapture
Of Your Presence
Bowing in humble submission
In complete abandonment
All fears disappear
My senses are elevated
My heart is soothed.

This place is outer-wordly
It takes my breath away
There is nothing I can hide here
You gaze upon my soul
Your Love washes over me
I am totally swept away.

From my belly the living waters flow
We are joined together
A moment of bliss
The creature, the Creator
The Potter, the clay
Together for a moment
Consumating prayer.

Forgiveness is granted
Joy is restored
Strength is received.
In the presence of my Lord.

Psalm 16:11 Thou wilt shew me the path of life: in thy presence [is] fullness of joy; at thy right hand [there are] pleasures for evermore.
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