Joseph also went up from Galilee, out of the city of Nazareth, into Judea, to the city of David, which is called Bethlehem, because he was of the house and lineage of David, to be registered with Mary, his betrothed wife, who was with child. So it was, that while they were there, the days were completed for her to be delivered. And she brought forth her firstborn Son, and wrapped Him in swaddling cloths, and laid Him in a manger, because there was no room for them in the inn.
Now there were in the same country shepherds living out in the fields, keeping watch over their flock by night. And behold, an angel of the Lord stood before them, and the glory of the Lord shone around them, and they were greatly afraid. Then the angel said to them, “Do not be afraid, for behold, I bring you good tidings of great joy which will be to all people. For there is born to you this day in the city of David a Savior, who is Christ the Lord. And this will be the sign to you: You will find a Babe wrapped in swaddling cloths, lying in a manger.”
And suddenly there was with the angel a multitude of the heavenly host praising God and saying:
“Glory to God in the highest,
And on earth peace, goodwill toward men!”
Luke 2:4-14, NKJV
Have you heard about our plans for the FaithWriters Gathering this summer down in Georgia (the state – not the country )? We are holding it July 15 and 16 in McDonough, Georgia – fellowship, fun, inspiration, and, of course, some writing stuff.
But this isn’t going to be just another writing conference. Instead, we want you to have hands-on experience with the things you most want to learn or develop. But what are those things? THAT is what we are trying to find out. We have loads of ideas, but we want to offer a program that the majority of you will enjoy.
This is the first of a series of survey we will be posting to find out what works best for you. We don’t want to put on an event that doesn’t actually interest anyone, or one that is telling all the same old things. We want you to love it.
So if you are thinking about attending the FaithWriters Gathering (15-16 July, 2016) or even if you are just hoping to attend at this time, please take a moment now to complete this very simple survey. Just tick the boxes. The survey will be available for a few weeks. We would LOVE your input in that time!
Query Letter Mistakes to Avoid
by Suzanne Hartmann
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There are so many literary agencies out there that it can be tempting to send a generic letter out to bunches of agencies at the same time to see who shows interest in your book. The problem is that not every agency represents each subject and genre, so sending out a generic query letter to every agency under the sun is the best way to guarantee a load of rejection letters.
Agents receive so many queries each week that they can afford to be selective. As they scan over your letter, they will stop reading any time they hit a reason to reject a query: your manuscript has too many words, they don’t represent your genre, you’re not published and they only represent published authors.
You can save yourself a great deal of heartache from rejections if you simply check the website of each agency before your query them, then only send to those agencies for which your book is a good fit.
Sending the query to an agency that doesn’t accept your genre
One of the most common reasons for a rejection is that the agency doesn’t represent the subject or genre of the book. If the agency doesn’t represent what you’ve got to sell, then it’s a guaranteed rejection.
Agencies state on their website what they represent, so make sure you check the their submissions guidelines. Sometimes they also specify what they don’t represent as well. Some agencies give a broad statement that applies to the entire agency. Often, however, the individual agents will represent different subjects and genres. You may need to check each agent’s individual page on the agency’s website.
See eight more tips on query letters, and several other “top ten series,” at Suzanne’s blog
Suzanne Hartmann is the author of the novels Peril and Conspiracy, Christian suspense she calls fiction with a twist of the unexpected. For the last several years, she has also stepped into the editorial side of writing, with her work at Port Yonder Press and now Castle Gate Press. She offers a plethora of easy-to-understand writing advice on her blog, Write This Way, which she has compiled into a book of the same name (available at her blog). When not writing, editing, or homeschooling, she enjoys scrapbooking, Bible study, and scouring local library sales for good deals. She loves to encourage fellow authors, so stop by her Facebook Page and drop her a note.
LINK for Write This Way: Write This Way Blog: http://suzanne-hartmann2.blogspot.com/2007/01/write-this-way-take-your-writing-to-new.html
LINKS for Suzanne:
Facebook – Suzanne Hartmann – Author
Twitter – @SuzInIL
Harriet Ford is a writer and speaker, and FaithWriters member – and a runner up in the FaithWriters 2015 Page Turner contest. Read on to learn more about Harriet, her novel in progress, and get a peek at her sense of humor.
JOANNE SHER: First of all, congratulations on your Page Turner placing! Can you tell us a bit about how you found out? What was your reaction?
HARRIET FORD: I first discovered my Page Turner placed from your email request for an interview. I said, “Wow! Thank you Lord.Woo Hoo!” I must have sounded like Daffy Duck. The Lord doesn’t mind. He knows what a joyful noise is, even if it sounds ridiculous.
JOANNE: When do you first remember developing a passion/love for writing?
HARRIET: I fell in love with storytelling when I was a child. My dad could spin wondrous yarns at bedtime and I insisted on one every night.
HARRIET: Writing is a career for me. I am a veteran newspaper columnist and reporter. In the late 1980s, I entered a contest to replace the then-famous Ann Landers. I was in the top 100 of 11,000 entries. My editor gave me an advice/humor column which appeared weekly from 1990 to 2014. I’m good at advice. Just ask me. Everyone is entitled to my opinion.
JOANNE: Share a bit about Voodoo Vanquishing Vixen. Where did you get the idea for it? What’s it about? How far along in it are you?
HARRIET: Voodoo Vanquishing Vixen is a suspense adventure with a hint of romance for readers of all ages, especially those who have grown up on Harry Potter and the Vampire series. It is the first of a three-part series called “Beyond Fantasy.” There is a biblical message wrapped inside which illustrates why witchcraft is forbidden by God. As a retired school teacher, I know what kids are reading and I’m very concerned.
Debbie Roome is no stranger to the Page Turner. This is her third time named as a finalist – but THIS time, her book Twisted Ribbons has taken the top prize. Read on as we hear about Debbie’s writing, her passions, and what inspires her.
JOANNE SHER: First of all, congratulations on your win! Can you tell us a bit about how you found out (I believe you were actually on vacation)? What was your reaction?
DEBBIE ROOME: I was visiting my parents in South Africa and it was early in the morning in their time zone. I was sitting in bed reading when my phone dinged – a message from Deb Porter suggesting I check out a post on her Breath of Fresh Air Press Facebook page. I’d completely forgotten it was the day the Page Turner results came out and my heart was racing as I clicked on the link. When I saw I’d won, I was so excited and also grateful that the hours of work I put into my entry had been worthwhile.
JOANNE: Bet your parents were excited. This is your third time in the Page Turner winners’ circle (though, of course, you were a runner up the other two times) – and the second year in a row. Do you have “a secret?” Where do you get your ideas from?
DEBBIE: My best ideas are definitely inspiration from God. He takes the things I see and experience and adds His life to them, enabling me to turn them into stories and words that can reach people’s hearts.
JOANNE: Two of your past placements were for non-fiction – yet this year, your win is for fiction. Which do you prefer? Which do you write more frequently? Do you feel most comfortable writing?
DEBBIE: At heart I prefer fiction and this is the area where I have had the most success. I dreamed of writing books from a young age so it’s a passion that’s always been part of me. However, I write non-fiction as well and am equally comfortable with both forms of writing.
JOANNE: Share a bit about Twisted Ribbons. Where did you get the idea for it? What’s it about? How far along in it are you?
DEBBIE: Twisted Ribbons starts off in a remote village in the Southern Alps of New Zealand. It’s an area I pass through every few months and I love it when it’s snowing up there. I was on a trip through the mountains when the outline of the story dropped into my mind and it’s grown and developed over the last few months. I have the whole book outlined and have finished the first three chapters. I spent hours working on the first chapter, making it the best I possibly could. It starts off in 1980 with a medical scene in a rural clinic. I tracked down a nurse who was working for government at that time so she could check it for accuracy. She made a few corrections and I was confident when I submitted it the Page Turner that it was the very best I could have done.
Ruthlessly Eliminate Hurry
There is a quirky quote I found pinned at eye level near the kettle in the kitchen. It reads ‘Ruthlessly Eliminate Hurry’. Simple to read, however, not so simple to do. It reminds me of the wise words of Evelyn Underhill describing our current state of being. “Most of us live such fractured and fragmented lives that centeredness (wholly centering on one thing) is a foreign word to us. The moment we try to become collected, we become painfully aware of how distracted we can be. We will become convinced how unruly and how ill-educated our attention is, how ineffective our will is, and how far away from the captaincy of our own soul we really are.”
Our dilemma is hurry. Hurry is the whirlwind force that breaks into our lives screeching, ‘Do More and Do it Faster!’ When hurry rules we have forfeited the captaincy of our own souls, indeed our entire lives. Hurry is in charge and we become its slave, distracted on the inside, distracted on the outside. Hence daily, hourly, we must eliminate hurry or it will eliminate how we were designed to be: fully present, fully awake, and fully alive to each moment. Oh how there is an urgency in our time to notice and enjoy one thing at a time, and thus missing nothing!
So how can we endeavor to eliminate the ever increasing compulsion to live beyond the parameters of being present to each single event as it occurs? Perhaps these musings provide helpful answers and inspiration to discover what is appropriate for you.
- Can I take time to stop, to pray between each event or conversation? Can I remember what has just happened, notice how I feel and respond accordingly? Is there really a need to rush straight ahead?
- Can I become aware of what I am doing right now – think about that one thing long enough to make it an intentional action and be fully engaged in it?
- Can I stare my compulsions full in the face, recognize their hold on me and resolve to master them through boundary setting? Can I ask God to help me and believe in His goodness towards me in this regard?
- Can I slowly look another in their eyes and give them my 100% attention?
- Can I deliberately speak and move slower today, and be conscious of this?
- Can I be sensitive enough to stand in the shoes of another and consider how they might be feeling? What their needs are?
- Can I notice when I am rushed and stop long enough to ask, ‘why?’
- Can I breathe deeply and consider with gratitude the example of Jesus who never rushed nor allowed the agenda of others to set His pace?
- Can I set limits on how much I take in? Can I ask, ‘Is it really important, helpful, or edifying?’
- Can I ponder over just one teaching, one new discovery, or one instruction completely, letting it have full effect, rather than consuming more?
- Can I take time often to withdraw, to be, to remember who I am, whom God has created me to be?
- Can I live simply being content with the blessings I have?
May we together seek to live wholly and fully into each moment God has graced us with.
Jennifer Woodley and her family live on the picturesque Darling Downs near Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Jennifer has completed a Bachelor of Theology (Christian Spirituality) through the Sydney College of Divinity. She is currently studying Australian History and creative writing at the University of New England (Armidale). Jennifer has a passion for both mentoring and writing as she encourages others on their faith journey with Christ.
After a VERY long wait, we are pleased to say that the newest FaithWriters Writing Challenge anthology is now available for purchase!
This book features the writing of over 60 FaithWriters members who placed in the editor’s choice during the third quarter of 2011. Writers were challenged to write entries between 150 and 750 words with the topics being famous literary titles – from The Comedy of Errors to War and Peace to Persuasion. The top ten entries in each topic are in this book for you to enjoy. Be sure to pick it up – great for giving!
And the authors (note: if you are on this list and have not received an email from Deb Porter, please contact her) are: Continue Reading…
After almost 12 months of excitement and nail-biting suspense, it is time to announce the winners of the ninth annual FaithWriters.com//Breath of Fresh Air Press Page Turner Contest.
The 2015 Page Turner Writing Contest began during the first week of January, with the focus for the year being fiction manuscripts. Entrance to the competition was open to all members of the FaithWriters Platinum 500, and 42 submissions were received before entries closed on October 31.
Entries comprised a book proposal, outlining the planned work overall, together with the first chapter of the manuscript. Judging was based on how well each entry worked in a number of key areas, including creativity, freshness, craftsmanship and, most important of all, page turning power and potential for publication.
According to Contest Coordinator Deb Porter, “I have anguished over this final decision. Each of the three top entries could have taken first place. I wanted them all to have it, but in the end, it came down to the fact that the first place winner had crafted her story that little bit better.”
And now, without further ado, this year’s winner and two runners-up:
2015 PAGE TURNER CHAMPION:
Twisted Ribbons by Debbie Roome
2015 PAGE TURNER RUNNERS UP :
Voodoo Vanquishing Vixen by Harriett Ford
One Act of Defiance by Rachel Malcolm Continue Reading…
It’s the day after Thanksgiving here in the US. But that doesn’t mean our thanks needs to stop.
We have many, many things to be thankful for. But, at the root of every single one is one simple, mind- blowing, undeniable fact: God’s love is eternal. From everlasting to everlasting, from creation to the new heaven and earth, from the smallest transgression committed by accident to Satan’s rebellion, His love endures forever.
Are you STILL thankful to God for all he has given you?
It is almost time to crown a new Page Turner champion.
That’s right – in just one week, just ONE winner will be announced out of the 41 entries submitted. That person will receive the following prizes:
- A fabulous cash prize of $500 (US);
- The offer of traditional publication of their winning manuscript by Breath of Fresh Air Press;
- Final editing of their manuscript (through Breath of Fresh Air Press);
- Free publicity and marketing of their book on all FaithWriters’ sites for twelve months following publication; and
- A special Page Turner Champion award plaque.
In addition, two runners up will each receive a $50 cash prize, a special Page Turner award plaque, and consideration for future publication by Breath of Fresh Air Press.
But, we have to wait until December 1 to find out who those people are. Oh, what to do in the meantime?
How about check out the list of the top 15 finalists? Sure, it isn’t the winners list – but they ARE on this list somewhere, right? And worthy of note, yes? Maybe check out their FaithWriters profiles and see some of their other writing.
But for now, here are the top 15 finalists for the 2015 Page Turner Contest (listed in alphabetical order by book title):
Anomaly by John L. Owens
Game of Kings by Zach Fox
Hotel Hope by Ed Decker
My Heart’s True Home by Diana Dart
One Act of Defiance by Rachel Malcolm
Sorrell’s Gun by Rachell Barrett
Sow the Wind by Gary W. Ritter
Such a Time as This by Meghan Andersch
The Children are Dying by Dave Walker
The Girl Under the Porch by Leola Ogle
The Indentured Daughter by Ruth Ann Cornelson
These Walls by Tracy Nunes
To Dig Up by Tisha Martin
Twisted Ribbons by Debbie Roome
Voodoo Vanquishing Vixen by Harriett Ford