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Megan Stared the mini challenge part deux
by Karen Wilber
03/23/08
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Jet Black

Megan stared at the stain, horrified. Yesterday she had given Ya-el this copy of The Book for safekeeping. Now, he had disappeared and the torn cover bore the jet black stain of carbonized flesh that testified to a micro-blast from an Org soldier’s weapon.

The Book was safe for now, but her time was running out. Megan sprinted for her star fighter, clutching the last hard copy of the scriptures still in existence.




Messy Megan

Megan stared at the stain, horrified.
And said “This just won’t do.”

She rubbed it with her other hand
And 1 stain became 2.

Megan stared at the stains, horrified.
And said, “I hope Mom doesn’t see.”

Then she dropped her chocolate ice cream cone
And 2 stains became 3.

Megan stared at the stains, horrified;
Ice creamed from head to shoe.

Her mother returned to the kitchen,
“Child, what will I do with you?”




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Betty Castleberry 26 Mar 2008
Wowsers, you really said a lot with the first one in such few words. I'm still smiling at the second one. :0)
Beth LaBuff  25 Mar 2008
Wow! Your first story left me wanting MORE! What an imagination! Your second poem was so clever and fun, definitely something a Mom could relate too. I like your "part deux" title :)
Holly Westefeld 24 Mar 2008
Another vote for more of the first story. The second was a lot of fun.
Pat Guy  24 Mar 2008
Ooooo! Karen! I love these! I agree, the first one needs quite a few sequels and the second is perfect!
Jan Ackerson  23 Mar 2008
Top notch, Karen! Really makes me wonder what the 3rd one was--even your rejects are far better than anything I could have imagined.
Tim Pickl 23 Mar 2008
I love them both! The first one reads like the beginning of a great book!
Lyn Churchyard 23 Mar 2008
Ooh yes, story #1 needs developing. #2 is just plain fun. Well done Karen.
Kristen Hester 23 Mar 2008
Well,you did it again. Masterful! These are both great, and totally different. I really think you captured the mission of the challenge! Bravo.
K. J. Cash 23 Mar 2008
I love them both! Futuristic save the Bible story. That's great. And the poem was brilliant too!




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