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Megan Stared a mini challenge
by Karen Wilber 
03/20/08
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Fancy and Faithfulness

Megan stared at the stain, horrified. At six and twenty she feared her only prospect for felicity lay in securing the affections of Mr. Godfrey, who possessed not only the estate of Knightwood, but ten thousand pounds. Now her ball gown was ruined.

“Excuse me, Miss Hamilton.” It was Edward Smith, who had recently accepted the living at Dellingham. “It grieves me to see you in distress. Might I be of assistance?”

Megan smiled warmly.




Femme Fatale

Megan stared at the stain, horrified. Johnny wouldn’t like it. He liked a job done right. No bodies. No evidence.

She examined the implements of her trade, a hired killer. If she didn’t make this go away, he’d never trust her again.

“Let him get some other dame to do his dirty work,” she said as she removed the rat’s corpse and spattered blood. Tomorrow she’d resign her job at Johnny’s Pest Control.





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Glynis Becker  27 Mar 2008
Both are fantastic!! And so different...congratulations on a well-deserved win!
Jan Ackerson  26 Mar 2008
Congratulations, Karen--you're one of the winners of this week's mini-challenge. See the message boards for more details.
jodie banner 26 Mar 2008
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! WOOHOO!!!!
Pat Guy  24 Mar 2008
I LOVED these mini-movies! Awesome!
Melanie Kerr  23 Mar 2008
Two very diverse and well written stories. The first one certainoy left me wanting to read more.
Sally Hanan 23 Mar 2008
Very clever on both, and I was delighted to see the Austen-type piece. :)
Holly Westefeld 22 Mar 2008
Diverse and delightful.
Joanney Uthe 21 Mar 2008
You tell so much in so few words. Great job. I really like the first one -- it is the type of thing I would pick up at the library or bookstore. The ending of the second one was a fun surprise.
Kristen Hester 21 Mar 2008
I am a HUGE Jane Austen fan (Becoming Jane is in my DVD player right now) so of course I loved the first one. The second was great as well. I loved that she was killing rats not people. What a nice surprise. This is a winner in my book.
Lyn Churchyard 21 Mar 2008
Karen, what wonderful stories! Jane Austin and Sam Spade all in one challenge! Well done girl!
gene hudgens 21 Mar 2008
Karen, I hope that I also someday become a master writer. Gene Hudgens
Loren T. Lowery 21 Mar 2008
Wow, a period peice in only 75 words. I wanted to keep reading. The pest control was priceless, thanks for the smile it gave.
Mo 21 Mar 2008
The surprise ending of the 2nd made me smile.
Jan Ackerson  20 Mar 2008
Oh, Karen, these are priceless! Jane Austen and...I'm not sure...Micky Spillane? At any rate, I had great fun reading them! You're certainly a versatile and gifted writer.
Tim Pickl 20 Mar 2008
Masterful writing! I love it.
K. J. Cash 20 Mar 2008
A whole setting and everything in the first one. Great job! You got me on the second one. Great surprise ending.




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