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Shadow People
by Marita Vandertogt
03/14/08
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Shadow People

Hennessy released the old woman’s arm when the light turned green.
“It’s okay ,” he said. “I can manage now.”
And continued his walk alone.


A Child’s Revenge

Jeremy kicked the stone with his foot and watched it fly across the yard, his father’s head, bouncing, hitting the street, like his mom.
Why?


Dancing

Olivia’s body sways to the music, like before. The sound of metal still echoes in her head as her legs hold firm to the chair.


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Seema Bagai  21 Mar 2008
Each piece is thought provoking. Great job.
Gerald Shuler  15 Mar 2008
I agree about the third one. It took three reads for me to catch up with the full picture. When it hit... wow!
Gerald Shuler  15 Mar 2008
I also wanted to comment on the first one. (I hope the second one doesn't feel slighted because it's good too.) The first one told a complete story that gave a total picture of the unexpected. I loved it.
Karen Wilber 15 Mar 2008
All three excellent. It's amazing that the mind can take in the story quickly--then stop, "what was that, again?"--then wham! the meaning hits. Very well done.
Lyn Churchyard 15 Mar 2008
Humor, then she throws in a huge "wham". Great stuff Marita.
Pat Guy  15 Mar 2008
Wow! Wow! And double Wow!
Beth LaBuff  15 Mar 2008
All three are so thought provoking. Excellent!
Jan Ackerson  14 Mar 2008
Marita, the third one is exquisite.




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