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Like a River
by Amy Michelle Wiley 
09/11/06
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Shock flows over me
Like a river
Numbing me with cold
With disbelief

Tears flow out of me
Like a river
Hurting me with loss
With pain

Fear flows over me
Like a river
Paralyzing me with terror
With unknowns

Anger flows through me
Like a river
Burning me with horror
With hatred

Resolve wells up in me
Like a river
Strengthening me with power
With honor

Hope flows under me
Like a river
Buoying me with faith
With calm

Love flows over me
Like a river
Comforting me with friendship
With care

Peace flows over me
Like a river
Assuring me with belief
With prayer



2006 Amy Michelle Wiley

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Brandi Roberts 11 Sep 2006
I love how you equated the emotions to a river. I love the repetition of "Like a river"... I love it all! Well written, I'm sure the majority of people went through those same emotions on that tragic day.
Kaylee Blake  11 Sep 2006
Wow. I loved how the simple short sentences and the repetition of "Like a River" created so much power. Wonderful job.




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