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I am so pleased
by Jacky Hughes
04/27/05
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Please read this poem twice. Read it inserting son, or daughter, depending on whether you are male or female, and then read the end. It is God's word to you, and a prophecy poem.

Some may find it hard to read. May God progress your healing to the point where you can hear and enjoy your Heavenly Father's praise. A good parent is able to give praise, and you have a good Heavenly parent. This is what God is saying about YOU.


Your beginning

My son/ daughter you are doing great!
I am so very pleased.
I am telling everyone,
"Look at my son/daughter"
A Father's allowed to be proud
When His son/daughter does well.
And I am shouting from the rooftops of the world,
"LOOK, LOOK"
My son/daughter did good.
He/she's great.
Listen to my son/daughter.

Your Middle

Son/daughter,
You've done great till now.
I trust you with this new task.
I know you are scared,
I know you would like in this moment,
Just for once,
Not to do so great.
But I need you to do this for ME.
This one thing that will be everything
And I am relying on you.

You to Him, your answer

I need to hear those words,
I need to know it is all worth it,
All those times I said 'no"
Because I wanted to be obedient,
While feeling the longing of temptation.
I can carry on if I know
You are well pleased.
Dad,,,,,,,,,,
I love you so much

Your end and beginning

My son/ daughter,
You did great!
You are doing it still,
Listen to my son/daughter!
I am so very pleased.
A Father's allowed to be proud.
LOOK, LOOK at my son/daughter
He/she's great.

Now read again below with some minor changes

HIS beginning

My son, you are doing great!
I am so very pleased.
I am telling everyone,
"Look at my son."
A Father's allowed to be proud
When His son/daughter does well.
And I am shouting from the rooftops of the world,
"LOOK, LOOK"
My son did good.
He's great.
Listen to my son.

HIS Middle

Son,
You've done great till now.
I trust you with this new task.
I know you are scared,
I know you would like in this moment,
Just for once,
Not to do so great.
But I need you to do this for ME.
This one thing that will be EVERYTHING
And I am relying on you.

HIS answer

I need to hear those words,
I need to know it is all worth it,
All those times I said 'no"
Because I wanted to be obedient,
While feeling the longing of temptation.
I can carry on if I know
You are well pleased.
Dad,,,,,,,,,,
I love you so much

The reason why we have the beginning.

My son,
You did great!
You are doing it still,
Listen to my son.
I am so very pleased.
A Father's allowed to be proud.
LOOK, LOOK at my son
He's great.



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Joyce Reed 28 Apr 2005
Dear Jacky, These are the most beautiful combination of words that has touched that chord in my heart. My soul cries out,"Dad,,,,,,,,,, I love you so much" Thank you for these blessed lines, Jacky
Joyce Poet 27 Apr 2005
"I can carry on if I know You are well pleased." The deepest, most oft spoken cry of my heart. And to hear Him answer "I am so very pleased" is still hard to accept in our carnal hearts. I think it just goes back to our ability to receive His forgiveness... much less His blessed acceptance. What a beautiful word you've laid out for me today. Because The Son "did great," I believe that He loved me enough to let me do great as well. Jacky, I am so ministered to that I can scarcely see through the tears to write. Thank you for your obedience and this most blessed word of encouragement.




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