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This is a wonderful testimony to what Christ can and will do in our life. I should know, he saved mine in many ways.
Well written with a strong, powerful message. I would suggest you enter this into the testimony contest if you haven't already. Go to the address below. Great job! The deadline is July 20th.
http://faithwriters.com/testimonycontestpage.html
I really liked this. You made some great points. It is true that people want the winning feeling. I really liked how you shared personal experiences as that comes off in a nicer tone. I think I can relate to that. Often, though, when I read something that uses the universal you, it can make me feel as if I'm being lectured or like a reticent child. Maybe some of the lines could use a bit tightening. For example this line: What if I were to tell you, there is one competition with a sure win for anyone who enters.
could be tightened with something like this: I discovered one competition where everyone who enters is a winner.
(It might not be perfect, but it is a tad shorter and also keeps that first person voice. Also the way it is, it probably should have a question mark, though I can see it as a rhetorical question too.)
Overall I think you did a great job. I could see part of this as an entry to the testimony contest. You did a great job making me stop and think.