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by GreenLeaves
Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:56 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for SHHHHH
Replies: 32
Views: 27537

Thanks, Ruth, sometimes it's nice to feel like a little girl at 61. :lol:
by GreenLeaves
Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:43 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for SHHHHH
Replies: 32
Views: 27537

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL! I am floored myself. I don't know what to say. Just getting a "highly commended" for the very first time is HUGE for me! I am so excited I feel like a little girl jumping up and down! :lol: And this time I didn't get very many comments, so I thought it was no good....
by GreenLeaves
Wed Mar 03, 2010 12:06 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 69742

I just sigh when I read these other entries. What a creative bunch! You all are fantastic. Love reading your homework! When I grow up I want to be just like all of you. :D

Carol
by GreenLeaves
Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:40 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 69742

Thanks, Jan. That makes a lot of sense to me.
by GreenLeaves
Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:16 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 69742

Aw, Jan, I feel like I've just been given a great big hug. Thank you. This truly is hard for me. I'm just not that creative. In reading your story example, which I loved, by the way, I have a question for you. Here's the part I'm questioning: **** His wife cleared her throat again, and Paddy tumbled...
by GreenLeaves
Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:06 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 69742

Oh dear, oh dear...do I HAVE to? This is SO hard for me. I need to make this quick because I think I'm having kidney issues again. Here goes: Carol got up to clear the table she had so carefully laid for she and her husband. "Amy called today," she said. "Little Eli was showing his da...
by GreenLeaves
Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:59 pm
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Lesson Suggestion
Replies: 7
Views: 10893

I just thought of something else I could use some help with.

It was me.

It was I.


All those I/me issues, you know?


Thanks. Your lessons are helping so much!

Carol Penhorwood
by GreenLeaves
Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:08 am
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for Phew!
Replies: 15
Views: 15128

I'M SO EXCITED FOR ALL OF YOU. CONGRATULATIONS!



Carol Penhorwood
by GreenLeaves
Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:12 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 97844

Jan, I'd probably write more dialogue if I wrote more prose. I know your classes will help me enormously. And the writing challenges are helping me get my feet wet as well. Poetry just comes so much more naturally to me. I've been testing the waters lately with the challenges but don't seem to do ve...
by GreenLeaves
Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:32 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 97844

I rarely write dialogue. I usually avoid it like the plague so this should be interesting. ***** "I really feel like I've screwed up my life. And I'm supposed to be a Christian," confided Melanie as she slumped down on the sofa crying. "I didn't know who else to talk to." Linda r...
by GreenLeaves
Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:04 pm
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas (Part Four)
Replies: 20
Views: 32706

:lol:
by GreenLeaves
Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:48 am
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas (Part Four)
Replies: 20
Views: 32706

:rolling
by GreenLeaves
Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:24 am
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas (Part Four)
Replies: 20
Views: 32706

Hmm...teacher's away....hmmm....
by GreenLeaves
Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:12 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #1
Replies: 103
Views: 166262

Yeah, I had already done the gallstones a few years back and they took the gall bladder too! :lol: So far no liver stones. I'll pass, thank you. (Wee, little problem...there are lots of kidney stones still in left kidney that I hope settle down or disappear.) But the spiritual conversations in the h...
by GreenLeaves
Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:16 pm
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: A break from commas
Replies: 21
Views: 22639

I hate missing anything, but I wouldn't want to add to your work load.

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