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There's something else I could use help with and I don't know if it has been mentioned quite this way. In my poetry I sometimes tend to switch from "we" to "I". Sometimes it is deliberate to personalize it, but other times, it is a problem. Also, the use of commas. Will you be co...

I can't do dialogue at all, but that's been mentioned a few times.

And when to use present or past tense would be useful.

I would like to be a part as well; I have SOOO much to learn... What about this from THE THINGS WE DO FOR LOVE by Kristin Hannah: "Memories didn't live on streets or in cities. They flowed in the blood, pulsed with your heartbeat. She'd brought it all with her, every loss and heartache. The wei...

Thank you, Deb, that answered my question. I appreciate the help.

Deb, I do have a question while we are talking about this... The first time I made the top 40 was on the "Brown", but I guess that means you don't always then make the top 15 in your level. Is that right? Because the second time I made the top 40 was in "It's a Colorful World" an...

I'll be glad to, Deb! Anyway I can help!

I'm a Newbie and I didn't know anything about the top 40 rankings until I heard about it on the Southern Porch! And then right after that I found myself in the top 40 and almost cried!!! I'll help if you want me to. What do I need to do? I make comments a lot on others' writing. Do I just need to le...

Oh, I'm so excited!! I've never seen my name here before! What an absolute surprise to me and especially with the way this one was written!!! Thank you one and all and, most of all, thank you, Heavenly Father, not only for the words You give me but for the wonderful friends I have made here at Faith...

Yes, but it didn't rank anywhere... It's called "God's Thumbprint" in the Advanced. I'm so proud of you. Your buttons must be popping!!!! Hey, Don, by the way, did you notice...I have TWO HOLES...count them....TWO HOLES now. See, JASE, you've have to "read back" a spell to know h...

I'm so sorry, I even forgot to congratulate you, that is

OUTSTANDING

You should be extremely excited! At least I would be!!!!!

Hi! I'm a Newbie, too! I've only been here at FW since October 22nd. What was your piece? I'd love to go and read it. And WELCOME!!!! This is truly the friendliest place around!!

Oh my goodness....... well, as my kids used to say, well DUH!!!!


Thanks for educating an OLD newbie!!!

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE WINNERS!! GREAT, GREAT JOB!!

I am such a Newbie...I didn't even know you DID this...I was just stumbling around and FOUND it!!!! Awesome job, you guys!!! CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!! CherieAnn, where do you get those awesome "dancing little people"--they're great!!!! (I think I'm computer illiterate!) When...