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by wheelygirl58
Fri Feb 20, 2015 9:21 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--2nd person
Replies: 35
Views: 34369

Re: Be a Better Writer--YOU WRITE IN 2ND PERSON

Hi, Shann! I think you got it with my piece. :thankssign so much!
by wheelygirl58
Thu Feb 19, 2015 9:22 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--2nd person
Replies: 35
Views: 34369

Re: Be a Better Writer--YOU WRITE IN 2ND PERSON

O.k., here I go with 2nd person. . . "You, yes, you the one who thinks of yourself only speck on that third rock from the sun. Well, I've got to tell you,the first off, I AM the one who created that rock where you reside on and I do not consider you a mere speck! You are a child of Mine along ...
by wheelygirl58
Thu Feb 19, 2015 8:01 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--2nd person
Replies: 35
Views: 34369

Re: Be a Better Writer--YOU WRITE IN 2ND PERSON

Diane, the nurse cartoon with EXTREMELY large syringe, just plain gave the 'willies'!! This is coming from a diabetic, no less!! :lol:
by wheelygirl58
Sat Jan 10, 2015 7:21 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--AVOID THESE COMMON ERRORS
Replies: 18
Views: 33383

Re: Be a Better Writer--AVOID THESE COMMON ERRORS

:thankssign Jan, again! As usual, excellent timing for this writer!! A great times, I wonder if I am using THE right word, or rather, the correct spelling of that right word. Again, a huge :thankssign
by wheelygirl58
Mon Dec 01, 2014 9:45 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Thanks
Replies: 6
Views: 7687

Re: Thanks

I so agree to that has been written thus, far!! :thankssign Jan,your instruction has help this newbie fiction-writer.
by wheelygirl58
Tue Nov 04, 2014 7:18 pm
Forum: Rules, Ratings, Judges and Official Info
Topic: "Language deemed inappropriate for Christian readers"
Replies: 13
Views: 14706

Re: "Language deemed inappropriate for Christian readers"

I, personally, am deeply happy that I 'Googled' the phrase "Christian writers' forums" a while ago!! This is my Internet home where this Christian wannbe writer is settled in permanently! :superhappy
by wheelygirl58
Sat Nov 01, 2014 2:48 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--CONTEMPORARY FICTION
Replies: 19
Views: 21352

Re: Be a Better Writer--CONTEMPORARY FICTION

I just finished reading "Subtle Softening"--wow, that may have been taken right out of my mom's diary, if she wrote in one. She was very overprotective of me; she had already lost her eldest daughter to our mom's alcoholism. Add to this fact I had a congenital heart defect. So, I can plac...
by wheelygirl58
Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:32 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--SUSPENSE/THRILLER
Replies: 10
Views: 12189

Re: Be a Better Writer--SUSPENSE/THRILLER

That story IS very good, Gerry! :bow
by wheelygirl58
Tue Oct 14, 2014 12:33 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--HUMOR WRITING
Replies: 33
Views: 32832

Re: Be a Better Writer--HUMOR WRITING

Joanne, I love your "Care for an Apple?". It was wonderful, I laughed and that something we all do need!! :thankssign Keep up this excellent work! :clap
by wheelygirl58
Sat Oct 11, 2014 1:44 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY
Replies: 50
Views: 54947

Re: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY

:thankssign :thankssign bunches! I so aspire to write in a similar style as Mr. Steinbeck, in my own story; your instructions has helped big-time! I need to be be more bold with nouns, within my own products. :)
by wheelygirl58
Fri Oct 10, 2014 5:53 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY
Replies: 50
Views: 54947

Re: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY

Here are my two sentences: Anne had seen the lovely bird land on its owner's shoulder. Anne had seen the iridescent green and crimson feathered parrot, fly onto its owner's leather-covered shoulder. From John Steinbeck's "East of Eden"--- "On the wide level acres of the valley the top...
by wheelygirl58
Mon Sep 22, 2014 10:00 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's New Writing Lessons--TIGHT WRITING
Replies: 102
Views: 211323

Re: Jan's New Writing Lessons--TIGHT WRITING

This is my try: As Doreen sat in the subway train, heading home, a large man sat next to her, causing her a deal of discomfort. As the train entered the second of five tunnels, Doreen kicked herself mentally, for not buying one of those back-lit electronic books. While in the tunnel, she heard the m...

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