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by KassieOsesie
Mon Dec 30, 2013 9:04 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's New Writing Lessons--TIGHT WRITING
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Re: Jan's New Writing Lessons--TIGHT WRITING

:D Hello, I did the excercise. I could do with a lot more practice, I'm one of those who use unecessary words. This really helped. Here it goes: Doreen didn't look up from her book as the subway ran through the stations. Aware of the huge man beside her, she inched closer to the window. Almost halfw...

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