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Thank you, glorybee. You are so absolutely brilliant.

In the original, 'men' isn't capitalised. That is because the second line (hopefully) clarifies what kind of men. Not male men--human men. But it didn't look right on it's own, with no capitalisation. I'll change it back.

I have to say, this thread is :coolsign This is a first line of one of mine, if anyone's interested. "I don't know if you are the sort of person who likes music—I mean the kind of person who finds it as essential a part of life as food and drink." And another of my personal favourites; &qu...

I'm not on there, am I?
Arpy; when I have to put my real name to written works, I go by R. E. Potter

Yes, thanks. I'm a stickler for correct grammar, but I'm not the best at it myself.

To tell the truth, it's been bothering me since I went to sleep a few nights ago. (That's when my deeply philosophical thoughts come.)

But that helps!

Logically, I think it is 'none is'--not-one-is. But English doesn't have to follow logic. What do you think?