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- Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:46 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Beginnings #2--the 4th judging criterion
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The above is about me on the night my husband came home from Iraq the first time. I was trying to be dramatic with the breathing. It would have been made clear later when the rest of the story is revealed. I think the whole time hubby was deployed I held my breath. I was trying to relay that emotion...
- Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:42 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Beginnings #2--the 4th judging criterion
- Replies: 52
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Hi Here is my attempt at the homework assignment. I have reworked the start of something I wrote a while back. My last breathe was eleven months and two weeks ago, but in a few hours I will finally breathe. Pacing around the dimly lit room, I pull my sweater closer to my chilled body. I only hope th...
- Sun Nov 07, 2010 9:06 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Returning to class?
- Replies: 1
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