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- Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:54 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
- Replies: 94
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- Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:55 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
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- Tue Mar 02, 2010 7:55 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74407
Because it was Sabbath, there was no need to go to the well for water or to begin making bread. Mary decided to sit in Elizabeth’s garden and enjoy the fragrance of the flowers. After a while, Elizabeth came into the garden. Smiling at her cousin, Mary said, “Good morning, Elizabeth,” “Good morning,...
- Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:10 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #1
- Replies: 103
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Dialog Lesson
Thanks for the tips, Jan. Your suggestion about putting Tina's thoughts into dialog makes sense.
Now on to your next lesson!
Now on to your next lesson!
- Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:31 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #1
- Replies: 103
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Tina & Jocelyn
“No, Jocelyn, you cannot go see Spring Break Axe Murderer; you’re only fourteen,” Tina was trying to be calm, but her fuse felt short at the moment. “But Mom, everyone’s seeing it. Ashley and Tiffani really want me to go with them,” Jocelyn protested. “You don’t let me do anything.” Tina thought for...