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- Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:49 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Winners for ETERNITY
- Replies: 9
- Views: 10743
Re: Winners for ETERNITY
Congrats!
- Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:56 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Winners for CENTURIES
- Replies: 17
- Views: 19630
Re: Winners for CENTURIES
Congrats to everyone!!
I peeked and saw 9th place. Wowzer! That's good to me!
I peeked and saw 9th place. Wowzer! That's good to me!
- Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:51 pm
- Forum: The Water Cooler
- Topic: The New New Who's Who List
- Replies: 59
- Views: 100847
Re: The New New Who's Who List
Cajunluvie for Rachel Dorsey
- Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:30 pm
- Forum: Christian Writers' Groups
- Topic: Florida? Alabama? Georgia? Louisiana?
- Replies: 7
- Views: 17400
Re: Florida? Alabama? Georgia? Louisiana?
I used to live in Fl for years. Gainesville and Micanopy.
I just moved back to my hometown in Louisiana in June '09.
So.... this could be a South-East group?
I just moved back to my hometown in Louisiana in June '09.
So.... this could be a South-East group?
- Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:14 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Once in a Blue Moon Bonus Prize Winner
- Replies: 17
- Views: 17504
- Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:09 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Winners for THE MEDIA
- Replies: 10
- Views: 9973
- Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:42 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
- Replies: 94
- Views: 132540
No-No list 1. Someone's house burning accidentally or an arson incident that is being investigated. 2. A car engine catching fire while driving 3. Heating up food or cooking, baking in the kitchen where a fire breaks out 4. Campfire meetings in the woods with the Girl or Boy scouts or at summer camp...
- Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:01 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74312
Yes, Cajunluvie--except that your first tow paragraphs are both Cathie's, and could be combined. I went through my previous entries to see if I could find one with a dialogue between a husband and wife that'd be somewhat equivalent to this. Try this silly story and see if that makes more sense. Kee...
- Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:25 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74312
Yeah, I see what you're saying. I liked your rewrite of the beginning with Cathie much better than mine. :D Let me rewrite this again to see if I've got this right this time around. She reached across the sofa arm and pulled out a book, The Five Love Languages and waved it in front of his face. &quo...
- Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:08 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74312
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:23 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 74312
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:19 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 113746
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:57 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 113746
Re: Dialog Trouble
“Help! I’m soooo lost, and I can’t find ‘said’ anywhere. Please help me.” “Oh my, you are a sad case for lost and found. I did say to try to move the ‘good stuff’ into the dialog. Maybe I should clarify, ‘said’ is rather bland, not really good stuff, so put it back,” said Jan. “No, no, I can’t. I c...
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:56 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 113746
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:14 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 113746