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- Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:54 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #2: Beware of Adjectives and Adverbs
- Replies: 129
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My free verse, however, relies more on the reader being able to 'feel' what I'm saying, so I am more likely to use several descriptors in a row, though each one may be slightly different in meaning. Thanks for sharing this, Joolz. I tend to embrace redundancy in my free verse for the same reason. T...
- Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:17 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #2: Beware of Adjectives and Adverbs
- Replies: 129
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Hrm. Late to the party for the second week in a row. Sorry, Jan! I'll try better next week! Here's my lame attempt (I hate rewriting. UGH!) : Just a few more steps , Jan thought as she walked into her house and slipped the shoes from her weary feet. Her reward for surviving the day—moist chocolate c...
- Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:37 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's New "Class"--Writing Basics
- Replies: 115
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- Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:56 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class--TRIOLET
- Replies: 58
- Views: 65616
Okay, Okay...I told you I stink at this game, and I know I'm late to the party...but once I saw this thread, I just HAD to try. Here's what I came up with. No eye-rolling at my lameness. Triolet Attempt #1: Absent fathers lose their daughters. Daughters lose their confidence, chasing mythic, fairy-f...
- Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:01 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Poetry Class--TRIOLET
- Replies: 58
- Views: 65616